Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon with my children's names | Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon #264793

Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon with my children's names

Designs by: joanno

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Entry : #264793

Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon

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#265021
Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon with my children's names - Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon
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#264793
Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon with my children's names - Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon
 
#264792
Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon with my children's names - Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon
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#264791
Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon with my children's names - Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon
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#264695
Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon with my children's names - Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon
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#264694
Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon with my children's names - Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon
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#264500
Premature Birth Awareness Ribbon with my children's names - Tuva & Oliver
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joanno
June 20 2016 5:04am

Premature Birth Awareness ribbon with children's names

Thank you - you too!
katrinrisberg     Contest Holder
June 19 2016 1:06pm

Hi

Thank you for your hard work - you have done well. Just as I was pushing winning button, another designer popped in so she and another is just now competing in a extending few days.

Great thanks to you but for now I'll let your design be on hold.
Have a nice summer and big of luck in the future!
joanno
June 17 2016 4:58pm

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Submitted design #265021

This ribbon is most associated with premature birth awareness -
katrinrisberg     Contest Holder
June 16 2016 11:46pm

The ribbon more like this

Don't mind the colors but something like this would fit your design! More alive, you know.
katrinrisberg     Contest Holder
June 16 2016 11:43pm

Hi

Yes good! There is something that doesn't feel all right. I do love the butterfly, very detailed and also the flora. Love the calligraphic, exactly as I want it! The date could be a bit smaller.

I think it is the ribbon - it's to heavy compared to the other small nice details. I'm alright doing much lighter, more neat and thin. Make it in the same spirit as the other, the ribbon takes to much of the eye at the moment. Alright to keep some small lines around it as well.

I like your designs, you've done hell of a work. Keep up, maybe you'll win! :)
joanno
June 16 2016 7:35am

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Submitted design #264793

I changed the swirl/floral to form a heart and added some more swirls to frame the names.
joanno
June 16 2016 7:33am

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Submitted design #264792

joanno
June 16 2016 7:33am

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Submitted design #264791

Thought this might be a nice option
joanno
June 16 2016 6:57am

Premature Birth Awareness ribbon with children's names

Thank you - I will make those changes.
katrinrisberg     Contest Holder
June 16 2016 1:40am

Wow Absolutely gorgeous !

Thank you! <3

Could you do one more thing for me, please lighten up the ribbons lines a bit, feels a bit strong, and se if you can place the small foot on the end of pink - See the ribbon image on my Example Images. It's fine if you what to lighten up the edge of pinks lines to make place for the foot.

LOVE THE FONT and the swirls! Like the clean date better.
joanno
June 15 2016 4:07pm

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Submitted design #264695

joanno
June 15 2016 4:07pm

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Submitted design #264694

In this one, the date font has more background swirls.
I hope this is what you had in mind.
katrinrisberg     Contest Holder
June 14 2016 11:28pm

No keep butterflies and floral

Although tone down the colors of them or remove colors - try both and see what you think :) Can you also try to "close the butterflies" looks a bit like they're gonna eat my kidz ;)
joanno
June 14 2016 6:53pm

Birth awareness ribbon

I will make those changes. Do you like the butterflies and floral elements? or should those be removed too?
Thank you for your feedback.
katrinrisberg     Contest Holder
June 14 2016 1:00pm

Thank you

Hi such a lovely one! What about this:
- smaller font of dates
- remove colors or reduce it
- place the ribbon carefully and light in between with sting of the colors?
- maybe not even have infinity sign, only ribbon - that's more important.

Do like your idea!

I imagine to have it on shoulder, back or front and some thin lines goes above shoulder...
joanno
June 14 2016 12:41pm

Tuva & Oliver

Submitted design #264500

I would love to get this right for you.
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