Dystopian 1984 Tattoo | Dystopian 1984 Tattoo #366017

Dystopian 1984 Tattoo

Designs by: fiery

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$ 120.00

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24

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Completed

Entry : #366017

Dystopian 1984 Tattoo

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#366017
Dystopian 1984 Tattoo - Dystopian 1984 Tattoo
 
#365773
Dystopian 1984 Tattoo - Dystopian 1984 Tattoo
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fiery
February 4 2019 5:58am

question

Submitted design #366017

Am I going in the right direction?
andyclxt     Contest Holder
February 2 2019 2:04pm

comments

Hi Fiery,
You did a really nice job! I like the abstract direction you were going with but my main issue is that I have a preexisting tattoo that would prevent this design from working. The eye size works but the body portion is to wide but here are some design suggestions as well:
-Make the figure headless and have the wires attached to this rather than the fingers
-Remove the tv screen that the man is in altogether, that would probably make it a better fit.
-Give the piece a more frightening overall tone, like teary mascara running eyes, barbed wire, more rat silhouettes maybe?
-The body looks like its in a selfie pose if we can correct this as well.

If you come up with anything else I'd love to see it.
Thanks!
fiery
February 1 2019 1:37am

Hello.

Submitted design #365773

Hello. I was interested in your individual project. It's quite interesting and unusual. Could you give me some of your precious time and comment on your opinion on my first drawing? I'll ask you to evaluate it harshly and straightforwardly. The more corrections and additions the better! I sincerely want to understand your thoughts and create a truly individual and high quality tattoo sketch. Sincerely, Fiery.
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