Black Bird of prey with Sun between it's outstretched wings | Bird of Prey with Sun #172979

Black Bird of prey with Sun between it's outstretched wings

Designs by: MyShunshyn

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Entry : #172979

Bird of Prey with Sun

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#172979
Black Bird of prey with Sun between it's outstretched wings   - Bird of Prey with Sun
 
#172838
Black Bird of prey with Sun between it's outstretched wings   - Bird Of Prey design
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MyShunshyn
August 22 2014 12:59pm

Updated Design

Submitted design #172979

Hi, I reworked your design for you. I hope that you like this one better.

Let me know hat you think,

MyShunshyn
MyShunshyn
August 21 2014 12:29pm

Feedback

Thanks for yiur feedback. I will head back to the drawing board

MyShunshyn
BaronMuzz     Contest Holder
August 21 2014 11:27am

Beautiful but not quite right

Hello MyShunshyn,

I really like the shading used to bring out the feathers and the beautiful splay of the wings, but you have used quite soft shapes which causes it to be a bit too feminine, I am leaning more towards the proud dominant bird of prey (sharper angles). I am also wanting the bird and the sun to symbolic (made up of shapes representing the bird and sun) rather than anatomically accurate. You have created a beautiful sketch and the layering of the greys and blacks to build up the wings is very nice. For the sun and the rays I am looking for more flame like shapes and patterns to build up the image.

Sorry, I do really like what you have done, but it needs some changes to move towards what I see in my head.

My thoughts of what the bird should look like are more inline with that beautiful Pheonix which you have on your market place tattoo section.
MyShunshyn
August 21 2014 10:57am

Your Design

Submitted design #172838

Hi,

I hope you like what I have come up with for you.

MyShunshyn
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