Upper Arm - Children and Wife's Names

I like the vertical text part - the rest is hard to make out

Submitted design #26928

hello, here is a rough concept idea/sketch. please give me as much in put and more ideas before I go any further. My idea is to have the names somewhat hidden in the waterfall, the koi to be jumping, frog either on the cattail, or in the water, and the leaf/or leaves floating and perhaps falling into the water, with a japanese sun symbol , please let me know your thoughts.