deep sea diver and giant octopus tattoo

thanks for the sketch mate! you artists make me sick i cant draw a stick man, and you call this a rough sketch! lol . ok positives first i really like the perspective its different from what i imagined but it works ,i also love the sea bed it was much more what imagined and simple things like the weeds i really like . i think you are correct it does have a cartoonish feel but like you say the shadeing may change that i think alot of that is in the octopus eyes. i not sure if your able to see moonwildflowers sketch he/she has got more agressive look but i prefer the curved lines of your octopus.i think biggest change i would make is the posture of the diver he looks to be in a fetal position were as i would love to see him more opened up with attitude so you can see the front of the diver , in the photos i attached with the description on the middle right thers a great photo of a diver i just love, i want to imagine the diver saying to the octopus come on then you want some! lol ,the only thing i can add is if one of the octopus tentacals perhaps wrapped round a rock close to it .ok thanks again in advance kind regards . scobius

Submitted design #37347

Just wanted to see if this sketch was along the lines of what you were looking for. I didn't know if this came off as too cartoonish. More detail and shading will be added to give it a darker look. Let me know what you think, thanks brother