Creative Sun and Clouds Required for Pre-Existing Text

Submitted design #31419

Hello mate,

Looks like you're the only one who has submitted anything so the moneys pretty much yours!
I was wondering if you would be able to add one more ray of sunshine on the left side of the picture? It looks like its missing at the moment.

Many Thanks.

Submitted design #30992

Thanks man. No rush, still a few days left!

that's a easy fix, will get that to you here tonight, thanks.

Thanks for revising so quickly. I made a mistake in my previous message, 'servare' should have an r in it (you would have thought I should know being on my arm!!) Really sorry to be a pain. The edges now look good and will look even better when on skin I reckon. If you could amend the servare then I can't see anyone putting forward anything better.
Thanks again for your time and sorry to be a nuisance. I wanna make sure it's right so I can take it in and say this is exactly what I want!
P.

Submitted design #30890

This is almost perfect - I really like the idea, thank you.
A couple of things, the spelling of "mento" should be "memento" and "serbare" should be "sevare" (the b's look a lot like the v's in that font but there is a subtle difference.) Also, would it be possible to soften the edges a bit so it blends in to my arm a bit more?
If you can make these changes this will be exactly the sort of thing im after.
Thank you again. You're obviously very talented.
Paul.

Submitted design #30805